Audible Audio Edition
Listening Length: 8 hours and 39 minutes
Program Type: Audiobook
Version: Unabridged
Publisher: Jerri Hines
Audible.com Release Date: January 10, 2014
Whispersync for Voice: Ready
Language: English
ASIN: B00HSR6ZAM
Best Sellers Rank: #958 in Books > Audible Audiobooks > Romance > Historical #1440 in Books > Audible Audiobooks > Romance > Suspense #13319 in Books > Romance > Romantic Suspense
This book had potential. It had an interesting story line, with good potential for intrigue and action. But most of the intrigue seemed to go on behind the scenes. Solving the "mystery" just seemed to fall into their laps after weeks of, apparently, not much real action - or at least little that we were privy to. And I get tired of those books where the minute the hero meets the heroine, all he thinks about is getting her into bed, honorable or not. And why, when every time the heroine turns around she is crying, is she always "horrified" to feel tears threatening? You'd think she'd be used to them by now, since she seems to cry every time anybody says three words to her. Overall the action was predictable, boring and not particularly believable. And as far as I can tell, the H&h met about 4 times (with her mostly trying to avoid him and be angry when she couldn't) and they were in bed together, declaring their love. Not much build-up or suspense there. And as for TSTL heroines go, what was she doing trying to get herself and those around her killed so many times? She knows the bad guys are after her, so why is she always running off without her protectors?But my biggest problem with this book, and why it felt like I had to beat my way through it, was the writing itself. (And why did I bother to beat my way through? Because I ALWAYS finish a book. It's a sickness.) I'm convinced that English is not this author's first language - or that she had terrible grammar teachers. The prose is so tortured and awkward, and I'm not sure she knows the meaning of a lot of the words she uses. She needs to look up the meaning of the word "renounced" (which she used multiple times) - I'm pretty sure she meant "denounced.
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